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Title: Meeting between the Ivorian and Congolese Prime Ministers on the occasion of the Francophone Games
Introduction :
Ivorian Prime Minister Patrick Achi recently visited Kinshasa in the Democratic Republic of Congo to participate in the Games of La Francophonie. On this occasion, he had a fruitful meeting with his Congolese counterpart, Jean-Michel Sama Lukonde, to discuss bilateral cooperation and strengthen ties between the two countries. This article takes stock of this meeting and its issues.
Development :
During their tete-a-tete, the two heads of government discussed the preparation of the Games of La Francophonie, which opened this Friday evening in Kinshasa. Patrick Achi took this opportunity to congratulate the Democratic Republic of Congo, President Félix Tshisekedi and Prime Minister Jean-Michel Sama Lukonde for successfully organizing this major sporting and cultural event. He stressed the importance of cooperation between the two countries and expressed his satisfaction with the warm welcome they received.
The heads of government also discussed bilateral relations between Côte d’Ivoire and the DRC. Patrick Achi mentioned that President Alassane Ouattara had personally sent him as a representative for these Games of La Francophonie, thus confirming the commitment of the two countries to strengthen their collaboration in various fields. They thus discussed current issues as well as the possibilities of strengthening economic and trade relations between the two countries.
Conclusion :
The meeting between the Ivorian and Congolese Prime Ministers on the occasion of the Francophonie Games was an opportunity to strengthen ties between the two friendly countries. The exchanges focused on bilateral cooperation, the games themselves, but also on economic and trade relations. This meeting bears witness to the importance given by the two governments to regional cooperation and the promotion of the Francophonie