Article: Growing insecurity in Kinshasa: a generalized psychosis
For some time now, the increase in kidnappings in Kinshasa has been causing serious concern among the population. The editorial staff of CONGOPROFOND.NET interviewed several inhabitants of the Congolese capital and it is clear that the situation of insecurity has generated a real psychosis.
Marcel Muamba, a shop assistant of Indo-Pakistani origin residing in Masina, testified: “My cousin was kidnapped by armed men in a taxi and held captive for three days, until our family paid ransom of $500 via mobile money transfer”. He also adds: “In my neighborhood, we have recorded three cases of kidnappings, one of which unfortunately ended in death. We are terrified and wonder who will be the next victim”.
These kidnappings were carried out primarily using yellow taxis, commonly referred to as “Ketches”. The population who used these taxis as a means of transport expresses its concern and asks the authorities to take drastic measures to put an end to this phenomenon.
It is important to point out that the police recently arrested a group of criminals, made up of about thirty members, who were tried and sentenced. However, the population considers the action of the police to be ineffective, as kidnappings continue to increase day after day.
The climate of mistrust has settled throughout the city, making it difficult to identify the taxis used during these criminal operations. Doubt now hangs over every driver and passenger, creating a nightmarish situation for taxi drivers who struggle to find customers and see their livelihoods threatened.
It is urgent that the competent authorities, in particular the national and provincial interior ministers, take more effective measures to put an end to this worrying phenomenon. The population is impatiently awaiting the end of these criminal and inhuman practices.
Miradie ODIA (Intern) / CONGOPROFOND.NET
Analysis of substance and form:
The article concisely and clearly reports on the situation of growing insecurity in Kinshasa, based on concrete testimonies and mentioning significant events such as the arrests of criminals by the police. The tone is objective and informative, allowing the reader to quickly understand the issue and the urgency of the situation.
The structure of the article is also well thought out, starting with the general introduction on the insecurity in Kinshasa, then presenting the testimony of a resident and then providing additional information on the methods of abduction and the reactions. of the people and the authorities.
However, a few points can be improved to make the article even more captivating and engaging. For example, it would be interesting to include figures on the number of kidnappings and the evolution of the situation over a specific period of time. This would make it possible to reinforce the impact of the information presented and to bring a more concrete dimension to the article.
In addition, it would be useful to mention the specific measures that the population asks the authorities to put in place to fight against these abductions, in order to insist on the importance of their action and to provoke reflection among readers.
In summary, the article effectively addresses the issue of insecurity in Kinshasa, but could be enriched by adding figures and specific demands from the population. These changes would enhance the relevance and impact of the article, giving the reader a better understanding of the situation and prompting deeper reflection.